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| long ago, the flashbacks of the wedding and the dinner.I felt that it definitely needed a lot of concentration to understand the implications of the ending, and for a twist of this kind that’s not such a good idea. You can be clear about your message and your twist without blowing it wide open. I suggest perhaps more explicit clues?It’s definitely one of those stories that doesn’t fall into a genre or plot convention. It’s meant to convey an emotion and it does it very well. Congratulations! |
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