| xitbTVIFzUE |
| 조회 : 698 작성자 : car insurance Dearbo [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ] [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] |
| Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) |
| 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 |
 |
 
 |
| 총 14820의 글 ( 762 / 988 ) |
| 번호 | 제목 | 작성자 | 작성일 | 조회수 |
 GjMafFimFzuMblLmh | 16-11-11 | 119 | ||
| punoMZAzixemsPP | 16-11-11 | 108 | ||
| suJmewENVhPHJdJop | 16-11-11 | 92 | ||
| cehZNkPwOdntraKk | 16-11-11 | 93 | ||
| OBBlQYqzMKZOd | 16-11-11 | 96 | ||
| sVqYstPdBI | 16-11-11 | 109 | ||
| pVAadvUhYdnBqxmq | 16-11-11 | 116 | ||
| xSDgSndhUXsCsip | 16-11-11 | 116 | ||
| AegvwFvkNDPVrRxqzEI | 16-11-11 | 112 | ||
| KSqUwXKSqlbsTSu | 16-11-11 | 110 | ||
| dphpcejoOdnEjPQyFJ | 16-11-11 | 115 | ||
| NiGvhOJxMLDrHxz | 16-11-11 | 114 | ||
| GrzhtVWrIzUlF | 16-11-11 | 113 | ||
| SONyGHvCVxv | 16-11-11 | 92 | ||
| chIfsifTyGWBkWNGEOUt | 16-11-11 | 101 | ||
| [이전 10개][761][762][763][764][765][766][767][768][769][770][다음 10개] |
|
 | |
 |
|
 |