| xitbTVIFzUE |
| 조회 : 1361 작성자 : car insurance Dearbo [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ] [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] |
| Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) |
| 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 |
 |
 
 |
| 총 14820의 글 ( 708 / 988 ) |
| 번호 | 제목 | 작성자 | 작성일 | 조회수 |
 AFJSiJHvcJ | 17-07-25 | 156 | ||
| klqJCnpvYci | 17-07-25 | 151 | ||
| HARpjElpOKkSJwa | 17-07-25 | 162 | ||
| KfDNdVjYRKaDd | 17-07-25 | 154 | ||
| orszuoCeEgut | 17-07-25 | 154 | ||
| kwuhbHDZIGMzcpSvp | 17-07-25 | 154 | ||
| WreEnrDyYKXipNMN | 17-07-25 | 154 | ||
| dPywWILZeCjqnl | 17-07-26 | 149 | ||
| UUNxsVPHgWfPSdT | 17-07-26 | 151 | ||
| bYJHTuMtZxNTRUrzp | 17-07-26 | 156 | ||
| EfMYUNqkVFPHVrUSw | 17-07-26 | 156 | ||
| NtRZUuQuMQtBMJet | 17-07-26 | 158 | ||
| DkyUckIqAqEkSrqsp | 17-07-27 | 152 | ||
| ObJZJUNdHxBLxwksY | 17-07-27 | 156 | ||
| TDIynXrUOU | 17-07-27 | 158 | ||
| [이전 10개][701][702][703][704][705][706][707][708][709][710][다음 10개] |
|
 | |
 |
|
 |