xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 394        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 463 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 7890     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 408 7889     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 408 7888     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 414 7887     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 416 7886     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 414 7885     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 413 7884     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 418 7883     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 423 7882     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 418 7881     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 417 7880     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 426 7879     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 422 7878     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 424 7877     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 425 7876     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 424 [이전 10개][461][462][463][464][465][466][467][468][469][470][다음 10개] 제목 내용