xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 210        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 462 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 7905      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 2945 7904      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 3010 7903      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-06-30 3109 7902      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-06-30 3218 7901      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-06-30 3320 7900      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-07-01 3463 7899      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-07-01 3606 7898      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-07-01 3855 7897      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms ZMskyuza 25-07-01 4223 7896     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 141 7895     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 140 7894     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 142 7893     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 142 7892     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 141 7891     JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms admin 25-06-30 144 [이전 10개][461][462][463][464][465][466][467][468][469][470][다음 10개] 제목 내용