xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 1238        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 460 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 7935      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 4128 7934      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 4146 7933      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 4224 7932      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 4241 7931      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4283 7930      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4309 7929      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4363 7928      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4377 7927      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4415 7926      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4500 7925      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4515 7924      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4601 7923      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4632 7922      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4694 7921      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms username 25-06-30 4745 [이전 10개][451][452][453][454][455][456][457][458][459][460][다음 10개] 제목 내용