xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 1236        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 458 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 7965      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3595 7964      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3591 7963      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3604 7962      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3600 7961      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3613 7960      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3643 7959      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3646 7958      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3654 7957      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3681 7956      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3678 7955      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3694 7954      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3702 7953      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3739 7952      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3776 7951      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms author 25-06-30 3782 [이전 10개][451][452][453][454][455][456][457][458][459][460][다음 10개] 제목 내용