xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 1286        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 456 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 7995      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3135 7994      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3154 7993      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3185 7992      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3215 7991      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3227 7990      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3223 7989      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3260 7988      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms anonymous 25-06-30 3249 7987      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3273 7986      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3287 7985      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3339 7984      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3340 7983      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3350 7982      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3359 7981      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms editor 25-06-30 3359 [이전 10개][451][452][453][454][455][456][457][458][459][460][다음 10개] 제목 내용