xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 74        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 452 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 8055      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 337 8054      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 340 8053      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 345 8052      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 351 8051      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 351 8050      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 361 8049      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 367 8048      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 372 8047      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 375 8046      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 378 8045      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 384 8044      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms manager 25-06-30 386 8043      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms guest 25-06-30 386 8042      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms guest 25-06-30 387 8041      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms guest 25-06-30 391 [이전 10개][451][452][453][454][455][456][457][458][459][460][다음 10개] 제목 내용