xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 893        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 449 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 8100      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms user 25-06-30 1469 8099      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1508 8098      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1496 8097      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1502 8096      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1498 8095      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1501 8094      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1523 8093      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1538 8092      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1541 8091      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1550 8090      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1562 8089      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1554 8088      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1556 8087      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1564 8086      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms system 25-06-30 1567 [이전 10개][441][442][443][444][445][446][447][448][449][450][다음 10개] 제목 내용