xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 1195        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 443 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 8190      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1330 8189      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1313 8188      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1318 8187      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1333 8186      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1333 8185      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1330 8184      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 1335 8183      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1342 8182      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1344 8181      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1357 8180      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1371 8179      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1376 8178      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1359 8177      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1362 8176      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms root 25-06-30 1361 [이전 10개][441][442][443][444][445][446][447][448][449][450][다음 10개] 제목 내용