xitbTVIFzUE 조회 : 1626        작성자 : car insurance Dearbo     [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ]  [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 총 14820의 글 ( 441 / 988 ) 번호 제목 작성자 작성일 조회수 8220      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 2004 8219      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 1982 8218      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 2022 8217      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 1991 8216      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 1991 8215      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 2040 8214      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 2010 8213      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 1998 8212      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms test 25-06-30 2006 8211      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2009 8210      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2014 8209      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2020 8208      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2011 8207      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2042 8206      JduoIQxQYxEUCeduaKms Administrator 25-06-30 2026 [이전 10개][441][442][443][444][445][446][447][448][449][450][다음 10개] 제목 내용