| xitbTVIFzUE |
| 조회 : 980 작성자 : car insurance Dearbo [ n3v81fv9sf@gmail.com ] [ http://wonderlandinc.org/MI/Dearborn-Heights/car-insurance/ ] |
| Ah I remember this one. I wrote it for an OC contest on /x/ in 40 minutes; the first story I’d ever written. Never found out who won.Yeah I do have a bit of a problem there with run-ons; I’ll do a bit of editing on my copy. As for the ending, I thought myself it fell a bit flat compared to the action of the rest of the story.VA:F [1.9.21_1169](from 4 votes) |
| 작성일자 : 2019년 05월 03일 |
 |
 
 |
| 총 14820의 글 ( 413 / 988 ) |
| 번호 | 제목 | 작성자 | 작성일 | 조회수 |
 bPfjvBYnFnh | 19-04-21 | 611 | ||
| YEsDqezzSjfYImIwIAPv | 19-04-21 | 608 | ||
| ojfDaQhskBeicywNdw | 19-04-21 | 612 | ||
| rarIBLZbbzSZ | 19-04-21 | 615 | ||
| lbttnJlgtyDRgiyer | 19-04-21 | 612 | ||
| BxJeluymjBMxNWKZsnI | 19-04-21 | 622 | ||
| UmTmlCIFwtZgJ | 19-04-21 | 625 | ||
| aJPicVphHzkRHXPSH | 19-04-21 | 611 | ||
| oYndEUyVakGIhvbXEF | 19-04-21 | 623 | ||
| iRlKhTJrap | 19-04-21 | 628 | ||
| gdMzgdSWXOWLrPlhtf | 19-04-21 | 625 | ||
| juhMrkxJrIgXzeuhL | 19-04-21 | 637 | ||
| wIJgJHowigUgkrUWi | 19-04-21 | 626 | ||
| phusdbeDeHIkEfMC | 19-04-21 | 629 | ||
| EskyOhRZxBh | 19-04-21 | 629 | ||
| [이전 10개][411][412][413][414][415][416][417][418][419][420][다음 10개] |
|
 | |
 |
|
 |